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"tuck me in, adele"

muttered through a dark, dense room (with bodies and breathing)
giggled through boyish over-muscled teeth
turned on me like;
“you would know how to manipulate - wouldn’t you, kava?
when you lie, you lie with practice”
I’ll write out these behavioural patterns
in patterns
turned into pictures
tapping out of my features
as though that’s the only animate part of me

breathing is negligible
neurosis is needed
especially in building up a boy (you)
i didn’t need to need
but cut out parts of me
so that you could fill a hole you didn’t want in on
filled by a boy (instead)
whose dick was left
with some of the residual of your family’s dna
some sexual manifestation of a poor habit of mine -
desperately looking at graveyard landmarks
where your body took in the space
and I saw them fill out your features
felt them fill out your heartbeat
and breaths
and whatever part of me
that needed confirmation
that you were real and not the fucking enigma you seem
lamely polarizing and weakening the magnetic pull
of my lips to yours
“i don’t want to fall in love with him”
“i don’t not want
to fall
in love
with him
especially”
written in roses in some emotional hedge
that divides the statelines between


i think the residue of you
(some kind of pesticide of me-loving-you.tm)
is what’ll fuck me up most
holding back dead dad jokes and tallying how many times I let my weight indent next to (around, behind) you

the others cannot know

he others cannot know

your bones on cotton

cotton on me.

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the-common-cold Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Thanks for following me on tumblr (i-spose)! You have some really great stuff, I'm super impressed. Looking forward to future additions to your gallery!
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menteurmenteur Jun 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thankyou! and it's not a problem. ^_^
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menteurmenteur Jun 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thankyou! and it's not a problem. ^_^
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EllaAndTheBunnies Apr 30, 2013  Student Artist
Your work is simply amazing!
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menteurmenteur Apr 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
thankyou so much !
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EllaAndTheBunnies Apr 30, 2013  Student Artist
You are most welcome! And thank you for the watch, I really appreciate it.
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menteurmenteur Apr 30, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
no worries. your work is beautiful!
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Queen-Kitty Feb 25, 2013   Photographer
Thank you for the watch! I'm glad you enjoyed my gallery!
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menteurmenteur Feb 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
beautiful work! absolutely lovely. ^_^
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Christoph-Wilke Feb 15, 2013  Professional General Artist
Amazing work.
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